April 07, 2012Thank you, I have to watch as my style of writing is to get it all out and then edit it after and at times I get so into what I am doing I post the working and not final draft. My wife does most of our site and magazine editing and she has not had a look at this I am saving the final draft for her. It is odd as this story has not left my thoughts ever since I had it pop in one dull day in English class in 93 so I made it a point that I would finish writing it all down now and since I have Dragon, it helps to get it out faster. I will likely have the next couple of parts done soon.
The transition will likely need some polish as I have it as the opening, then the nice finale act, I know the who, what, and where of everything and everyone but need the exposition and such. I also have been more focused on the story rather than the dilogue between the characters. I figure that will come after I get the story out.
There is a bit of a hook at the end that may seem a bit silly or odd at first but I believe it will explain the Alien 3 stuff and blend into the new stuff well.
I am trying to get it done around my media work, but I think I can get a segment done each week, so will aim for the next part tomorrow and hopefully can post it later tomorrow or next week.