Alien: The Return of Ripley: Part 5

Garethvk

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Here is the latest segment of the story. I will have the next chapter, next weekend. [url]http://sknr.net/2012/05/06/alien-the-return-of-ripley-part-5/[/url]

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May 06, 2012

AWESOME THE NEXT INSTALLMENT IS HERE THE NEXT INSTALLMENT IS HERE !!!

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May 06, 2012

wow man, that part IMO was perfect, really really really good man, lots of terror right there too "as Snorky" might say. great job, Loved the Blue Beam touch at the end cause you aren't sure until the last line of the part what that was and loved the descriptions of Ripley's thoughts on being careful with the man/men she was dealing with. Excellent Man KUDOS on Part 5!!! That's good writing IMO and very imaginative!

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May 06, 2012

Thank you, I hope you enjoy part 6 next week.