Wish this had been in the original Alien
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Ghost Solitare
MemberOvomorphApril 09, 20121079 Views7 RepliesThe following excerpts are from the original script for Alien. The only reason I thought they might be of interest to this community is that in some ways they reflect what is going on in Prometheus, and they add a lot of substance to the characters who've remained an enigma long enough. 
                              
                           "ALIEN"
                                by
                            Walter Hill
                                and
                            David Giler
                        Based on screenplay
                                by
                           Dan O'Bannon
                             Story by
                  Dan O'Bannon and Ronald Shusett
                                             REVISED FINAL
                                             JUNE, 1978
EXT. PLANET - DAWN
        The trio moves through a dark limbo.
                                 LAMBERT
                  This way.
              
        Lambert indicates left.
        Moves in that direction.
        The others follow.
        The storm growing.
                                 KANE  
                  It's close.
        They approach a towering rock formation.
        The transmission stops.
                                 LAMBERT
                  It's gone again.
                                 KANE
                  Did we pass it.
                                 DALLAS
                  Not unless it's underground.
                  Let's take a break.
        They shelter with the rock formation.
        Storm howls round them.
        Dallas adjusts headset.
        The signal starts.
                                 DALLAS
                  I've got it again.  Let's go.
                                 LAMBERT
                  How about our break.
                                 DALLAS
                  No. Let's move on while we've
                  got the signal, again.
        Dallas gets up.
        They stand for a moment...
        Then move away from the rock formation.
        Fossilized into the other side of the rock is a shape.
        Fifteen feet tall.
        Unseen by the members of the party.
        INT. BLISTER - DAWN
        Ash receiving the video transmission.  
        Notices something within the formation.
        Freezes the image.
        Enlarges it.
        Enlarges again.
 INT. BLISTER - DAY
        Ash still working on the video image.
        Enhances the enlargement.
        Transfers the image to cathode ray.
        The image reveals itself to be a giant form.  Indistinct.
        Ripley's voice comes over.
                                 RIPLEY
                         (voice over)
                  How's it going.
        Ash quickly shuts off the video image.
        Hits the intercom.
              
        INT. BRIDGE
        Ripley at her console.
        Looking at Ash on her screen.
        Ash's video image not visible to Ripley.
                                 ASH
                         (voice over)
                  All right.
                                 RIPLEY
                  Have you tried putting the
                  transmission through ECIU.
              
                                 ASH
                         (voice over)
                  Mother hasn't identified it as yet.
                  It's not a language.
              
                                 RIPLEY
                  I'll give it a shot.
                             
                                 ASH
                         (voice over)
                  Be my guest.
              
        She pushes some button.
        The noise is now heard on her speaker.
EXT. PLANET - DAY
        Dust clearing.
        Three tiny figures against the landscape.
        EXT. PLANET - DAY
   
        Empty landscape.
        Then Kane comes up over a rise startled by what he sees.
        Suddenly the transmission is deafening.
                                 KANE
                  Jesus Christ.
              
        Dallas and Lambert join him equally startled.
        THEIR P.O.V. - DAY
        A gargantuan construction rising from the rock.
        Clearly of nonhuman manufacture.
        EXT. PLANET - DAY
        Noise still at shrill pitch.
        All members of the party shouting into their voice-amps.
                                 KANE
                  Some kind of spaceship.
                                 LAMBERT
                  Are you sure.  It's weird...
                                 DALLAS
                  Ash, can you see this.
        INT. ASH'S BLISTER - DAY
        Ash looking at the craft on a screen.
                                 ASH
                  Yeah.  Never seen one like it.
                  Neither has Mother.
                                 DALLAS
                         (voice over)
                  Keep checking for enhancement.
                                 ASH
                  Whatever the transmission is,
                  it's inside that.
                                 KANE
                         (voice over)
                  I'll go in and have a look.
                                 DALLAS
                         (voice over)
                  Hold on.  Ash, I don't see any
                  lights or movements.  Do you.
                                 ASH
                  I can't get any reading.
        EXT. PLANET - DAY
                                 ASH
                         (voice over)
                  It's putting out so much power
                  I just can't get any reading.
        Dallas shuts off his receiver.
        Sudden quiet.
        A long moment.
                                 DALLAS
                  It looks pretty dead from here.
                  We'll approach the base.
        They move toward the ship.
INT. BLISTER - DAY
        Ash still adjusting image of form in rock.  
        It suddenly resolves.
        A skeleton.  Fifteen feet long.
        He enlarges the image.
EXT. STRUCTURE - DAY
        The lower part of the entrance filled with dust and pumice.
                                 KANE
                  Looks like an entrance.
                 
                                 DALLAS
                  Yeah... Let's move inside...
              
        They climb up to one of the apertures and enter.
        INT. CHAMBER - DAY
        They move into a high-ceilinged chamber.
        Walls covered with shadowy lattices.
        Ghostly light filters dust-filled air.
        A few meters in an opening appears.
        Dallas leans over and looks into the hole.
        Only blackness.
        He unclips the light from his belt.
        Shines it down into the hole.
                                 DALLAS
                  It just goes down... smooth walls.
                  I can't see the bottom, light
                  won't reach.
        Kane and Lambert come over.
        Dallas begins unclipping gear from his belt.
                                 DALLAS
                  Let's take a look around here
                  first.
        Kane and Lambert exchange a glance.
        Dallas shines his light about, sees...
        A large, glossy urn, tan coloration.
        Round opening at the rop, empty within.
        Then Dallas shines his light on nearby lattice...
        Moves closer.
                                 DALLAS
                  Over here.
        They approach.  
        Train their lights along the floor.
        A machine.
        On the mechanism, a small bar moves steadily back
        and forth.
        Sliding noiselessly in the grooves.
                                 KANE
                  Still functioning.
        Lambert looks down at her direction finder.
                                 LAMBERT
                  Automatic recording.
        Dallas snaps it off.
 RIPLEY
                  Ash, tell Dallas Mother speculates
                  that the noise is some kind of
                  warning.
                                 ASH
                         (voice over)
                  I can't tell him anything.  I've
                  lost contact.  The transmission
                  around the ship is killing all
                  communications.
        Pause.
                                 RIPLEY
                  I'm going out after them.
                                 ASH
                         (voice over)
                  I don't think so.  We can't
                  spare the personnel.  We've
                  got minimum takeoff capability
                  right now.  That's why Dallas
                  left us on board.
                                 RIPLEY
                  I still think we should go after
                  them.
                                 ASH
                         (voice over)
                  What's the point.  In the time
                  it take to get there.  They'll
                  know if it's a warning.
        Ripley looks steadily at Ash on her monitor.
        His screen, not visible to her, shows blowup of helmeted,
        skeletal head.  Not human.
This just illustrates that Ash was acting covertly behind the scenes over the course of the entire film. I thought it was interesting that there was an URN onboard the derelict as well. Everything old is new again eventually. I also included the link in case anyone would be interested in reading over the material. It's an entertaining and deeper glimpse into a universe we all know so well. 
http://www.dailyscript.com/scripts/alien_shooting.html






