Script debut- 1st try- Alien redneck on the street interview

dk
MemberTrilobiteJanuary 20, 20172843 Views7 RepliesI have seen a lot of talk about people writing scripts but no examples. I have no idea how to do one but here is my first attempt and I completely expect ridicule.
However, if anyone finds any value and wants to run with it, by all means, do! Here is the background:
It is me interviewing people about AC- particularly about the assumption that Shaw is the victim of devious deeds. Again, please know I have never attempted this and I kept it clean as possible. (takes breath) here goes:
Hello, I am DK, proud member of what I call the Scified Collective. New footage of Alien Covenant has been released and I spoke with some people afterwards about it. Here were there comments:
DK- So what do you think of how Shaw is portrayed in this movie?
Anonymous 1- Well, DK, I think it is just wrong to see a youngish woman put through a situation like this just to punish her for saying that she deserves to know why some lily white manly looking man got woken up sleeping through the crack of noon. Maybe he would have answered her question if that other old fart didn’t interrupt her or if she woke him up to the smell of bacon cooking on an iron frying pan….He didn’t seem to have any laundry she could have washed for him.
Anonymous 2- Well, DK my friend and brother, she gave birth to a new generation. It looked pretty painful, but she sacrificed that pain for her beliefs. Conveniently, it is easier for me to empathize being male and all not having ever to had go through that myself, but you get my drift, right DK?
Anonymous 3- Why did Ripples flame all dem dere eggs? They didn’t do nothin’ wrong! They was just mindin’ their own bisness and got burned! They all deserved a meaningful life like anyone else!
DK: Okay, how do we raise these new human killing parasites who you say deserve to be born?
Anonymous 3- I just mind my bisness. That’s about personally responsibility and guvment!
DK: Umm…OK, but those things don’t seem to know or care about those concepts.
Anonymous 3- (grabs a broom): Get them li’l bass t$rds away from me ya hear? Call the Army! (Shuts and locks door- all 5 locks).