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MemberOvomorphJune 03, 2012650 Views2 RepliesCould increase the tension,.. everyone is on edge,. this is really scarey,.. long shots,. emphasise the shapes,. the size,. how foreign/alien it was,.. lets see some gigerish stuff please,.. increase the doom,. this doesnt look like the place we humans would have been created and originally came from,.. maybe this is a different place,...
Ok Part two,..
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Instead of the normal review,. I had a think about if i could change what i watched with Prometheus,. Keep the film as is but could add and/or take away parts that "could of been done better",...
Start of the film is amazing,. The cinematography and atmosphere building is one of the best,.. the engineer pain looked a bit naff,. better if he looked dignified,. intro as is in the film,.
Silence David as he looks after the ship,.. until the crew is awake,.. Could even add in the noise/silence of the ship,.. nice interior slow,.. even that would give the scareyness,. (classic sci-fi),. make it feel like it has been a long time flying through space,. give David a few mundane yet android capability computer input job,. add as much android references,. omit the watching and imitating of english actors./
The crew feel like they were picked up at random,. from an early morning raid with fifield to milburn enticed into a van with nice flowers,. a medic picked up from Strathclyde Nursing home,. etc,. could add a flash back interspliced history of them entering the sleep pods./ have the crew already awake.,? just nothing new to them waking up from hypersleep,. watching the dreams,.?? come on,.. lets in fact go daft with all the cool stuff on the virals,. lets see more pop graphics,. new futurist fonts,. ways of doing and being,. be as far out as possible,.. introduce,. make it a new groundbreaking movie,.
Briefing from holloway/shaw,.. if you heard that after you had no idea why you where on the ship,.. they way they presented it,.. heres a couple of nice photo's,,and we concluded,... i wonder what the chances are that that exact star system wall painting thing could match hundreds of planets stars outthere.,? oh you think its a god like creature,.? makers you say,. Oh you have given them a name,.. how nice,,. nothing from this cave painting that suggests to me that it means "we came from there" "come visit whenever your passing by" COuld add a bit more what they learned,. studied,. been at it for years,. forget the idea that they made us,. (until later) or (not in the way we think) its a sign of intelligent life and that alone,.
So we've arrived,. do an orbit around the planet,. some kool new camera surveys the surface,. info comes flying back,. muther comes alive,..stats,. images,. places of interest are shown,. ok worth entering the planet atmosphere,.. fly down,.. see the temples,.. fly by,.. everyone look to your left etc.// land at a safe distance,..
now slowly build this up,.. not "lets go" after all protocol was always be here,.. regardless of who's mission it is,.. this company has been landing on planets for years now,.. sit tight till night time/storm p[assed.,/ probes return,. automated sensor fly about thingys,. a nice prolonged view from the cockpit at night with the sillouette of the alien temple,. spooky,. winds,.. rocking of ship,.
More time now for characterisation,. meet people,. see how they are,. why they have been chosen,. backgrounds,. see how the future off world travel is,.. NOT they have just been asleep (2years) yet they all want a snooze and chill out with the inscence,.. have a drink,.. game of pool anyone,.? oh this planet with the huge alien thing just outside,.? it will wait til tomorrow,.. come on!!!
Night time,. Morning,,. not sure,,. but time has passed since landing,.
Enter the temple,.. now,. start the scarey music,. you have dark tunnels,. underground,.. dampness,.. water,. yet nothing could off been uncompletely frightening,. idea >Could increase the tension,.. everyone is on edge,. this is really scarey,.. long shots,. emphasise the shapes,. the size,. how foreign/alien it was,.. lets see some gigerish stuff please,.. increase the doom,. this doesnt look like the place we humans would have been created and originally came from,.. maybe this is a different place,...
Ok Part two,..