Prometheus 2 Perfect Follow Up

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MemberOvomorphApril 10, 20134023 Views45 RepliesPrometheus 2 Pitch
After the disappearance of Weyland's Prometheus ship and mission. Yutani Corporation makes a hostile take over of the Weyland Corp. and sends a new ship to LV 223 The Akagi Maru
The ship has company scientists, government officials and military personnel.
Once arrived on LV 223 They find still alive in a an emergency cryo tube "Meredith Vickers"
Meredith recovers and shows the location of the Derelicts to the new team from the Akagi. She wants to go back and explains the horrors of what this place was but has no choice but to go with the Weyland-Yutani's crew to the closest Derelict
A second more advanced military android named Kato, was sent with the Akagi crew. After arriving at the destroyed crashed Derelict, Kato turns on one of the ships navigation systems.
The Kato finds a way to connect
to the ships mainframe and by accident Kato is linked to it and receives data and learns the truth to the Space Jokeyes and Human connection. Kato starts talking in a deep voice " The Space Jockeys were an advanced biological robots system created by superior beings from an old dying civilization. Humans were an improved version of the Space Jockeys. Modern human DNA was implanted in the Space Jockey as a reproductive vessel to be activated when they spread their seed. Humans carry the codes in their DNA for the Creator beings to come back when if they ever got destroyed.
The Humans were designed to destroy each other. To control over population an evil "envy gene" was implanted. The Space Jockeys wanted to destroy humans and the Creator.
Kato says that the Creator beings were beleived to be destroyed in a war by the Space Jokeys. The Creator beings released their ultimate weapon the Xenomorph.
The crashed Derelict space display hologram shows a flashing light in an orbit next to an apparent dead planet called LV 426. The crew of Akagi with Meredith decide to go.
Once in orbit close to LV 426 the Akagi crew and Meredith finds a Derelict ship to their surprise. Lights around the Derelict ship are flashing. A small door opens as an invitation. The Akagi crew goes in. Once inside the ship and at its cockpit conteol center the crew finds David!!
The Akagi crew looks worried as teenagers that made a mistake. David was dysfunctional with severe bite marks on his face.
Kato tries to connect to David with no avail. David is totally disfigured but finally he turns on and with the remaining eye watches them. David asks Kato to download his memories and turn him off.
Meredith asked David if another Engineer was on the ship?
David says No.
Meredith then asks him " Who brought you here? Davis answers Shaw.
After a few seconds later Kato turns around, drops David's head and faces the crew to say
"Are you willing to die to find your answers"
Meredith shouts out at Kato "What are you trying to say you stupid machine!
Where is Shaw? Is there another Engineer? Who piloted this ship?
Kato says I did with Shaw who brought me here.
Where is Shaw? Where is she??? Says Meredith.
Kato says "It is in the ship"
Shaw is no more!
What's in the Ship??? Says Meredith.
Kato says with a frozen and dead look "The Creator"
The Creator was waiting for us to be reborn!
To be continued....
Part II of Prometheus 2 Pitch
Kato started to twitch and opened his mouth as something was happening with his programing.
Kato frozed.
A female who is a military specialized robotics designer and a scientist called Machiko, who rushed to it and tried to stop Kato as it fell to its back with its eyes frozen.
The boarding party of 8 which included an African American biologist named James Wolf. James who was the lead scientist asked Machiko "What's wrong with him" as everyone gathered around Kato.
Machiko said "I don't know. I will try a full reboot of its systems and if nothings wrong then it should take a few minutes
Back in the Akagi a military technician was finishing her hot shower next to a huge laboratory. She stepped out naked from the female locker room and pulled her towel that had some sticky oily liquid on it.
Kira looked at it in disgust when she turned around and opened a large closet door to pull another towel when something scratched her hand and she said "ouch". She slowly turned on the light of the large closet to see a fully grown Deacon unfolding. Kira screamed and ran naked.
The Deacon was now grayish in color and its head looked like a human skull with no eyes and less pointier in its head as it was when it was born. The Deacon was very attracted to the strong smell off human flesh.
In the Akagi Maru's cockpit were the other 3 remaining occupants including its Captain. Captain Eito was drinking coffee and looking at the Derilict in wonder, when it's outer door entrance started to close.
"James, this is Eito!"
James sayed "Go ahead"
"James, the outer door of the Derelict ship is closing"
James said "What"
Kira was running naked through the hallways and screaming Eito, Charlie connect me to Eito!!! Eito heard the screaming over the intercoms and shouted her name back when she stopped in a four way hallway. Kira was looking scared out of her life while she stared at every all the empty hallways.
"Kira!! What's going on???
Eito!! There is something here that came with us from that fkg planet!!!
When she turned to face her back a slime fell on her head and when she looked up a large opened mouth with human looking teeth just snapped and bit her head off in a split second.
Eito heard a dumping sound over the mike and he continued to scream and ask Kira what is it?? Where are you?
No answer came.
Eito asked the main computer "Charlie, where is Kira? Eito my sensors indicate that her voices came from the cross hallway 4 deck level 2"
Charlie, show me that location. Eito and the other crew members saw the monitors in disbelief as blood was all over the walls and her body on the floor. All three Eito, Fumiko and Beniko grabbed high voltage taser shotguns and ran to her location.
They where running frantically to her location. Once there, Eito saw with sadness Kira's decapitated body.
Eito immediately pointed his weapon forward and said "Fumiko cover my Six. Where's Beni?" Fumiko said Sir he was just behind me!!
Eito said Charlie put me on loud speakers "Beniko!! Answer me!! Are you ok!! No answer. Answer me God dammit!! The loud noise bothered the Deacon and it screamed back with a loud shriek!!! Which spooked Eito and Fumiko.
The Deacon ran past one of the hallways.
Fumiko saw it as it passed by at the end of the hallway and he said "Sir we need to get the fk out of here fast"
Eito asked "What did you see? Sir it's huge"
Charlie I need you to find the location of the shrieking noise by blasting loud music and put my favorite heavy metal song at full blasts all over the ship except my location NOW!!!
Fumiko says " Sir that's going to push it here? Eito "Yes that's what I want"
Charlie started playing Welcome to the Jungle by Guns and Roses at full blasts.
The Deacon turned slowly into the Hallway facing Eito. Eito said "Fumiko my 12 now" Full electrical charge! Deacon charged but both Eito and Fumiko fired electrical wired pin cartridges and hit the Deacon in its head with a 20,000 volta. The Deacon fell on the floor trembling and moving towards them while shrieking when it's head exploded.
Eito and Fumiko looked at the dead Deacon and they were relieved.
Eito said "Charlie good job. Yes Sir, Is there anything else I can help you with"
Yes Charlie please stop the music and get me James Wolf on the speaker please. Charlie said "Yes Sir"
Eito! Yes, Charlie go ahead. Eito all coms are broken with the other 8.
Back in the Derelict.
James was calling for Eito with no response.
Meredith said "Did Eito just say that the air lock door just closed?
All the lights inside the cock pit went black.
Machiko said "Everyone please turn your helmet lights"
Meredith shouted at them "I didn't just survive a two year cryo tube to die in this fkg ship!! I'm leaving, who's coming with me NOW!
James looked at her and said "You will not be going anywhere before I kill you first"
To be continued
Prometheus 2 Part III
James was pointing a gun at Meredith
James are you fkg crazy. I will make sure you will burn for this!!!
James says "I am close to making the greatest discovery of mankind and i will not let a disgruntled little bitch get in the way with it"
Someone grabbed James from behind and grabbed his gun and pointed it at James head while james faced the others.
Drop your weapons!! Kato screamed at the two other military escort team members that where carrying Taser shotguns. Kato's voice was just like Daivd's.
Meredith asked David is that you?
David answered "Yes ma'am"
Meredith asked how can that be?
I was designed with a special trojan programing to take over Prometheus main program systems if necessary or in the event of imminent danger to Mr Weyland, you or the mission by the crew.
David, what happened to Shaw? Meredith asked.
Ma'am, Shaw was absorbed by the walls of this ship. This ship seams to be a living bio-mechanical laboratory.
Humans were an experiment that at one some point some Space Jockeys and as you call them Creators disapproved and revolted.
Meredith asked against who?
Back at the Akagi.
Finished securing all bodies in body bags in the lab biological containers.
Eito said " Fumiko I have to go to that ship to find the others.
Fumiko said "Are you crazy? That ship is probably full of those nasty things and if not for our ceramic floors, that thing's blood would've burned a huge whole through the ship's hull.
I have to see if I can open the door and get in. I'm suiting up.
Eito was at the huge door of the Derelicts ship's outer hull when he touched the door and after a few seconds it started to open.
Fumiko, called Eito"
Go ahead "Fumiko replied"
Fumiko, the door just opened and if I don't come back in 12 hours then blow this piece of Alien junk out of sky and go back with out us"
Fumiko said but Sir!!! Fumiko if I dnt come back that means we are all dead and you are next!!! You got me??? That's an order!!! Said Eito.
"Yes Sir" said Fumiko
Meredith, Meredith "Shaw's voice called in a thunderous sound Everyone was looking around with their flash lights when the ships cockpit lights turned on, illuminating the walls. There, in the ceiling was a scary but beautiful bio-mechanical woman forming.
(From H R Gigers Necronomicon half female half Alien design)
Out of the walls came this beautiful being in what appeared to have a light resemblance to Shaw's face.
Her body was fuming as to an extreme temperature as she stood up over 12 feet tall.
Everyone was just frozen in amazement.
When the being's eyes opened wide...
To be continued....
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