Alien stories

Well done!Thank you dk!

Alright i think someone else should give this a shot.

"The oldest and strongest emotion of mankind is fear.And the oldest and strongest kind of fear is fear of the unknown."- H.P Lovecraft                                                                           In my first part i detailed a scene regarding a small group dicovering a lone egg.What i didn't elaborate on is how they found it in the first place.Let first start by saying that this planet has a very harsh climate.Due to it's rotation the planet's average day/night cycle can last days.The nights are particularly hostile with temperatures reaching forty below zero.The planet itself is a barren wasteland populated by endless gray sanded deserts.I should also note that this group if settlers are not the first to have been on the planet,They're actually a relief crew.The previous crew's job was to simply set up shop begin,consruct facilities for the relief crew to begin testing the planet to see if it's suitable to be terraformed.Upon arrival the team traverse's the terrain in what i like to call "The Big Rig".It's basically a giant mobile drilling platform.Various  members of the team,which is comprised of ten members,are out scouting when they discover a giant fissure with minor life signs reading from inside.That's were we find our three,Captain Collins,Derek Mitchell,and Karen Reynolds.They've been lowered into the fissure using a lift from the big rig's crane.Upon reaching the bottom they find a small system of interconnected tunnels that appear to be unnatural in origin,as if they've tunneled by something long ago.It is after going through these tunnels,some of which are so small they can only be crawled through,that they stumble across a small  chamber,seemingly empty except for this lone egg.How did it get there?How long has it been there?Why is there only one?

I would really like to hear the rest of your story NinXeno426 and I am still working on my script of Alien: Isolation. can't wait to hear from you :)

I will be including in my version of Alien: isolation the egg morph and try to explain how the "Queen" DNA came to be ;)

Movie fan i think it'll be ready by tonight.

Alien 5 ending scenes. Act i wrotte 1 hour ago on other comment section and dk advised to post here. I can do much better..i am gonna writte a full alien 5 plot after ac. But in meantime read the very rough concept of the ending scene.

Ripley upon ultimate disaster...looks at newt and lets her enter the escape shuttle...the door closes and a glass window stands between them..newt realise rilpley didnt enter. And looks at her shocked.ripley in sorrow says.

"you have to live,you are the only one alive that knows what happened here you have to destroy weyland yutani,their agenda will eradicate our race newt and i must stay here thats the only way i know this ends"

"ripley you cant do this ,you cant die,i cant do this alone!there must be another way!dont do this!"

with admiration and pride ripley looks at newt with a tear dropping

"I remember a little girl that survived against all odds and became a hero ,you can and you will newt,im counting on you,our race depends on it, you must survive,and i will finish what i started"

"ripley dont do it! I will stay with you we will kill them together and we go together,you saved me once let me help you!"

Newt is covered in tears ,and anger with ripley sacrifice,

Ripley faces newt with a tear escaping her eye but smilling

"i dont need help to where im going , i didnt save you, you saved me newt i will kill them all , promise me you will take care of wy little girl, you will allways be my little girl" 

Comformed with ripley decision,she is now aware theres no turning back,she could see in her eyes,commitment of a true hero that will sacrifice her life for the human race,and for herself.

"i promise, you will allways be a mother to me,end this morherfukers once and for all"

ripley mans up and puts her hero face with strong conviction and rage

"i will! Take care my little girl"

Sorrow takes over as ripley  press the button sending newt in a safety shuttle

She turns around with her special suit, engineer weapon...going towards the center of the hive to activate manually the self destruction sequence to blow off the facilities in space.

As she reaches the hive destroying some xenos in the way everything looks calm, a subtle silence pairs in the zone, she looks at the dead gutted alien king(created by wy scientist as ultimate weapon for war purposes and realsed upon the hive to contain the queen)

From the shadows of a dark passage...the huge head with scars emerge...slowly...looking at ripleys eyes..step by step the huge body appears as she growls..imponent,majestically

Ripley looks at her with courage ,bravely as a true hero..

" we meet again you bitch, but today i aint running away, i will kill every single one of you motherfukers!"

Ripley is dodging the attacks she gets her leg slashed but manages to gut the queen with the engineer tech gun wy made..the queen falls?.as she growls  a sos towards close drones and warriors ..ripley walks towards the button to activate the bombs..with the difficulty she sits on the ground next to it..looks at the helpless queen...

" yes call them you bitch, i aint running tonight i will send you all to hell.."

xenos starting to appear surrounding ripley...as she presses the button in a hero posture and all her splendor.

Booom...

Newt watching the explosion and looking at a wy logo (wy vs newt spinoff).

Post credit engineer ship appearing carrying what seems to be ripley body..putting it dowm on a altar and kneeling towards it as a omage..closing in flamboyant fashion..alien 1 music starts.

People cry and go nuts applauding.

I know i would.

Looking forward to reading more Tiago.

Part 2                                                                                                                     The team has safely moved the egg to the big rig in the decontam unit.The egg seemingly inert after untold generations of slumber.In a small lab aboard the big rig the egg is being examined by Sonya,the projects synthetic.The egg itself being kept in a sterilization chambers.Along with Sonya is the Chief science officer,Michael Willits,and Dr.Karen Reynolds .Captain James Collins observes from the relative safety of a moniter room.He hits the intercom.                       Collins"Willits have you ever seen anything like it?"                                  Willits"I don't think anyone's seen anything like it.Not in over 300 surveyed worlds.I honestly don't know what to make of it."                 Reynolds"Captain.Id like permission to open it up."                 Collins"Are all the quarantine procedures set up?"                           Reynolds"Yes Captain."                     Collins"Then go ahead."                     Near by with the captain are Derek Mitchell and Nora Chambers,project engineering.       "I'll bet it'll  just be a big f@&king omelette."                                             Chambers"I'll take that bet.Your on Mitchell."                                          Willits begins to make an incision at the top of the egg.           Reynolds"Careful Willits."                 Willits"I am.Hand me the forceps Sonya."Sonya hands him the forceps and he begins to pry it open.                                                   Chambers"Alright here's moment of truth.Get ready to pay up Mitchell."                                               Collins"Quiet you two!Willits whats inside?"                                                 Willits"A fleshy substance of some kind.It appears to be covering something."                                          Mitchell"Like i said a f@&king omelette.Some discovery."               Chambers"No Mitchell,there's clearly something in there.You wouldn't be trying to weasel your way out now would ya?"                    Mitchell"No especially since i just basically won."                                    Collins"You two shut the f@&k up or leave.Willits whats in there?"        Willits"There seems to some kind of life form.."                                Collins"Dr. Reynolds stand by.Be ready to purge the specimen if necessary."                                           Reynolds"With all due respect captain,Im afraid i can't do that.I mean this is unprecedented.I think the company might want see this"  Willits"Captain im inclined to agree with her.If the specimen is alive,there's limitless potential for what we can learn from it."                It is in this moment the creature within the egg begins to stir.Willits and Reynolds step back.Sonya remains where she is.                         Collins"Willits what's going on?"   Willits"Well captain our guest seems to be alive after all."                 Mitchell"No f@&king way!"              Chambers"Captain i don't like this."                                                      Mitchell"What's not to like.You just won the bet"                                 Chambers"F@&k the bet!Captain i don't think we're ready for this."     Collins"Agreed.Willits at the first signs of hostility i want it destroyed do you hear me?"             The thing in the egg stirs once again.Willits steps in for a closer inspection.                                            Reynolds"Careful Willits."                 The fleshy substance that concealed the creature begins to peel back.Willits inches closer.        Willits"Captain this is really quite extraordinary."                                     The egg peels back one final time.Something in the egg springs out.Reynolds screams.Sonya stands quiet,emotionless.Willits never knew what hit him.He falls to the ground unconscious,with an alien lifeform attached to his face.

Great stories, here will be the basic plot of the beginning scene for Alien: Isolation 

An exploration ship with a crew of 6 descends upon an unknown planet, one of the crew will get face-hugged the ship gets off the planet, unfortunately the alien bursts out the victim's chest and one by one they all die...

10 years later the colonization vessel: Sevastopol stumbles across a ship floating through space.

This was just a preview, but I will soon release the full story with all the details ;)

This sounds great Movie fan!Im looking forward to reading more.

I might make my story into another topic so people can see it at the very top, and people would be able to reply to the story.

I am looking forward to some more stories as well :)

Sounds good Movie fan.I might try another later.

Part 3                                                                                                                        It had been about an hour since the creature in the egg attached itself to Wilits's face.There had been an executive decision to freeze him.Dr. Reynolds had been quarantined in case of possible alien contamination.Sonya,being an android,was allowed to leave.While Captain Collins and the rest of the crew try figure out what to do with Wilits who has been returned to their main base of operations,Sonya along with the assistance of Nora Chambers,returns to the fissure where they found the egg. 

We find Sonya back in the chamber where they found the egg.This time she has gone in alone.Nora Chambers monitors her helmet cam.                                                                                                 Chambers"What exactly are we doing back here Sonya?"                                                                                   Sonya"I must concur with Dr. Reynolds,a live specimen would be extremely valuable."                                                                                           Chambers"There is a live specimen.It's on Wilits's face.Plus i was here on the monitor just like last time and i don't recall seeing any more eggs,if that's what you want to call it."                                                                                                     Sonya"The company refers to it as an ovamorph,and yes there's more down here."                                                                                                         Chambers"How do you even know that?I thought this was an unprecedented discovery?"                                                                               Sonya"There words,not mine."                                                                         Chambers"Sonya,is there an agenda i should be aware of?"                                                                         Sonya"If there is one,it's none of your concern."                                                                                                     Chambers"Frankly Sonya if there is one,it damn well better be my concern.I don't think i can allow you to bring another egg back."                                                                       "Nora Chambers,with all due respect,you are an engineer.My orders don't come from you.They come from the company."                  Sonya then clicks her com of,and shuts down her helmet camera.                                                                       Chambers"That synthetic bitch."

Meanwhile Sonya discovers a separate much larger chamber than the one before.Inside this chamber are thousands of eggs.Sonya ,along with the decontam unit,approaches an egg.The egg remains inert,seemingly aware,or perhaps aware of the artificial person approaching.She takes a tool,a cutting laser,and surgically cuts the tendrils that fasten it to the ground.She takes the egg with her and begins her return to the big rig.                                                                                                                         End first half of part 3.

Neat, keep it up! :)

Ok, here's my first 9 pages of my screen play draft. Apologies for the length, I couldn't figure out how to attach a document.

Feel free to comment/criticize!

Fade In:

ext. unnamed planet – night (2150)

Heavy rain, muddy terrain. A slosh of footprints. Gunfire and explosives. Marine dives into a ditch.

Overhead view of battlefield, drone view of the landscape below. Heat signatures show marines are outnumbered by unseen enemy threat.

Back to lone marine in ditch. Fumbles his radio. Explosion near him sends him flying. White screen.

Int. bedroom – day

Marine in bed with woman. She is beautiful. Creamy white skin, long blonde hair, pouty lips. He is muscular, lean. He has sandy brown hair, a tattoo of the American flag on his left bicep. They are laying together, eyes locked. He caresses her face. She mouths “I love you.” Flashback.

ext. unnamed planet – night (2150)

Marine is pulled from battlefield into APC and driven off. He is wounded, bleeding from ears, shoulder wound. Focus in on his eyes, they are steel, they are pale green, almost grey. They have the 10,000 yard stare.

Other marines in APC remark to one another he is the only one from his battalion they found.

Pan out from APC to landscape. Dark, rough, mountainous. We follow the APC to a dropship. It is battle damaged, scars of bullet holes line the exterior. It takes off.

We follow dropship through atmosphere. Grey clouds shoot by. A lightning bolt lights up the sky. We see tall mountains in a quick flash. Stars begin to light up the view.

Ship is in space around foreign planet. We see planet is large, dark, with blue-ish hue to it. Flash to marine on gurney, eyes still locked on to nothing, ever staring into space.

ext. Space

Dropship docks with main vessel. We see the name as the ship passes by, The Avenger.

int. the avenger – medical bay

Marine is unloaded and wheeled to medical bay. He is stripped of his armor until he is bare chested, bullet wound bleeding from right shoulder, black powder on his cheeks.

Doctor converses with others in background, overhear him say he’s lucky but will make it. He’s a goddamn hero.

At that, the marine closes his eyes.

fade to black.

ext. lv-114 – night – atmosphere processor (2152)

Weyland-Yutani building stands at the foot of a tall mountain. Cloud cover blanket’s the sky. It is a grey, dark, desolate landscape. The terrain is rocky, unforgiving. Several men in space suits walking around, inspecting the building. It is an atmosphere processor. We follow a man as he walks towards an airlock.

Int. airlock – weyland engineers camp

He steps in and is depressurized. He removes his helmet, he is bald, older looking. Small eyes, light skin, exhausted expression. He pushes an intercom button.

FOREMAN (Rodriguez)

This all looks splendid. The company will be happy to know we are ahead of schedule. In about six months the atmosphere will be breathable, and then the real work begins.

int. communications room – engineers camp

A man in a suit is on the receiving end of the transmission. He is tall, slim. Dark hair, dark eyes.

Security officer

Excellent. I shall send a message saying we can begin phase one of the operation.

He walks over to a control panel, a 3d hologram of the atmospheric processor is displayed. As he looks, more of the surrounding area becomes visible, electronic drones are mapping the area. One of the drones has gone underground, an elaborate cave system is now displayed. The drone has stopped moving.

The security officer presses the intercom button.

Security officer

Rodriguez, I want you and two of your men to head to Sector 11. One of the mapping drones has found something underground.

rodriguez (v.o.)

But sir, I’m scheduled off this rock in 12 hours, I don’t think-

Security officer

You’re not paid to think. You’re paid to do as you’re told. You’ll have plenty of time to catch your ship home. Retrieve a rather expensive piece of company property, or we can just deduct its cost out of your salary for this little job?

For a moment there is silence, an expression of disdain on the officer’s face.

Rodriguez (v.o)

…Alright. I’ll take Rivers and Edmunds with me. We’ll return shortly sir.

A smile fills the officer’s face. Satisfaction.

ext. Lv-114 – Stoney plains

Three men riding in a dune buggy, driving at a safe pace, dodging here and there rock piles. We follow the buggy and look ahead to its destination, a smaller mountain. Almost a hill, smoother in shape than the previous mountain. The east side looks collapsed in, a cave opening is found here. The buggy’s destination.

Looking down from the top of the hill, we see a broken structure, definitely not a natural occurring feature. It is partially covered with dirt/dust, only a few remnants of pillars remain. The men cannot see this. We follow down the slope of the east side to where the buggy has now parked.

The three men exit, look up the east side face, flip on their shoulder lamps, and begin the journey inside.

rivers

Well isn’t this the shit detail.

Edmunds

Who did you piss off to get us on this retrieval mission?

Rodriguez

Enough clowns. The sooner we get this damn thing, the sooner we can all be out of here. Let’s go.

The three men walk into the dark cavern, we watch as their lamp lights blink out in the darkness of the cave.

int. cave

We see the cave leads deep into the hill/mountain. The walls seem to be damp. We follow the three men as they approach an opening in their path.

int. cave – Entrance room

The walls extend out, the ceiling is higher. It is an actual room.

Edmunds

Wow. This is incredible. There’s no way this naturally formed. You sure nothing ever lived on this rock before we got here?

rodriguez

I’ve been here since this project began, we’ve never had any indication that there was indigenous life here. Hell, we’ve never even detected anything.

edmunds

Uh huh. Is that what the company has told you, or what you believe?

Rodriguez turns and gives a stern look to Edmunds. Edmunds returns this with a shoulder shrug.

We scan the room as it is illuminated by the men’s lamp lights. The room is dome shaped, no discernable features appear to be visible. The path they came in from seems to be the only way out.

rivers

Hey guys! I think I found something over here you might want to look at.

The men head over to where Rivers is. He is inspecting the ground near the far corner of the room. There is a tunnel, large enough for two men to fit through at a time.

More importantly, Rivers has something in his hand.

rivers

What in the hell do you think this is!?

His light blue eyes are fixated on a palm sized creature in his hand. It is dead. The body is segmented into two parts like an ant, but has eight needle-thick appendages extending from it. The creature is all black, where its head is there appears to be three small holes, possibly eye sockets. The mouth is wide open, fixed in a death scream. There is a small amount of dark green slime on its body.

Edmunds

No indigenous life my ass. What the hell is that then?

Edmunds turns to Rodriguez, his stance is that of a man on the attack. He is taller than the shorter, stockier Rodriguez.

Rodriguez

I don’t know! Jesus Christ I swear to you I have no idea what that is! Put it down Rivers, you don’t what it is! Let’s just keep going (motions towards the tunnel), that stupid thing has to be close by.

Rivers inspects the creature one last time, then toss it aside, the body making a squish sound as it hits the floor.

They turn to the tunnel, Rivers and Rodriguez followed by Edmunds.

int. cave – bug room

The tunnel descends and opens into a grand room. The walls are made of stone, the floor is covered with dirt, but a few stone tiles peek out. It was once a chamber that housed something. Against the back wall is a stone table, an altar. Surrounding the altar are four canisters, three are leaking a liquid, and one is sealed. The mapping drone is flashing against the back wall having no further to go.

rodriguez

There she is! Alright, Rivers go get that thing so we can get out of here.

Rivers gives a nervous glance.

Rivers

Why me? Can’t he do it? (Points to Edmunds)

Edmunds

Because he asked you. Just do it and let’s go. This place gives me the creeps.

Rivers looks at both men, sighs, and walks to the altar. He sees there are markings on the top of the altar and a strange script written on it. He cannot decipher it. Walking past the altar, he cautiously examines the two canisters that are leaking. The substance is viscous, dark, and thick looking.

rodriguez

Hurry it up, I don’t have all day!

Rivers jumps a bit at the order. He walks past the canisters and grabs the mapping drone, press a button to deactivate it, and places it in his pouch.

Relieved, he turns and is greeted by a creature that has crawled up onto the altar.

Rivers

Guys…guys...What the fuck is that?

They are already fixated on the creature. It is similar to the creature they found dead earlier, only this one was bigger.

It was the size of a small dog, its spindly legs moving ever so smoothly on the table. The segmented body contracting and expanding with every little movement. The head was hideous, mouth agape with a short, black proboscis protruding from it. It stares at Rivers with intent.

rodriguez

Move slowly. Just get around the table and when you get past run. Edmunds, if it tries to…Edmunds?

Rodriguez turns and sees four more of the same creatures descend from the ceiling, the spider-like webbing they hang from glistening in their lamp lights.

He see one has descended on Edmunds head.

edmunds

OH JESUS IT’S ON ME!! GET IT OFF!    

Edmunds begins flailing wildly, the spider firmly attached to the top of his head. In a flash, it releases itself from its web rope and wraps it’s appendages around his head.

From inside Edmunds helmet, we see the proboscis poking the glass visor repeatedly.

Edmunds

It’s trying to break my visor! It’s trying---

Edmunds drops to the ground convulsing. The proboscis has broken through the visor and entered his throat.

Rodriguez turned to Rivers who is still in a standoff with his spider nemesis.

rodriguez

I’m sorry Rivers. Good luck.

Rodriguez turns to exit back up the tunnel.

rivers

Wait a minute you bastard don’t leave me!

Rivers goes to move and slips on the liquid. He falls on his back and the spider leaps onto him. His screams dissipate as he succumbs to the proboscis as well.

Rodriguez has made it halfway up the tunnel by the time the screaming has stopped. His lamp light begins to flicker. He quickly presses his intercom button.

Rodriguez

Somebody, anybody do you copy? Hello? We have encountered something at Sector 11. I repeat, we have AHHH!!!

His transmission is interrupted by an unseen creature. He is dropped onto his stomach, his glass cracks open. He turns over gasping for air. This is short lived, a spider crawls up to his face. All goes black.

int. The avenger – edwards’ quarters

Fantastic Hicks/Hudson!Very well written.Can't wait to read more.

@ninXeno426

Thank you! More to come...

Nice, very interesting can't wait for more!

 Scene opens with a dropship flying through  dark stormy weather on a distant planet...pilot radios in to base open the hanger doors.....once pilot lands the captain opens ship doors and is greeted by station commander..."where is it ?,he asks hardly containing his excitement. The captain calls his crew to wheel out a container... Commander opens it... A mist pours out....as it clears to reveal what only can be described as a very large egg the commander smiles and looks toward the captain...."finally" he says....get it to decontamination block....alert the group...scene ends.....more later.

Look forward to it Xenowarrior1.

Continued....scene cuts to a young woman eating in a restaurant on base...she is a loner among the crew....as she gets up to put her tray away she sees  a group of scientists rushing through the halls pushing a containment unit...she steps out of the restaurant to see the group get into an elevator....the doors close as she looks on intently....she rushes to the toilets, locks the door...opens a vent above the toilet and pulls a tablet out...she writes a message " its here, they've really found it" , " what do you want me to do".

Await orders.... Reply

Scene ends..

Scene ...we arrive at a research laboratory ...scientists and corporate men are stood behind a thick impenetrable glass window looking on at something....as we look ahead we see a man strapped to a table upside down....he is sedated...under his face rests a large egg ....the onlookers are all waiting ...scientists giddy with excitement....

The man awakens , groggy and unsure of where he is...

"Help where am I, what is this, what the fuck is that," 

Suddenly the egg opens.....the man screams ....  

To be continued

Part 3 second half                                                                                               Chambers"This is Big Rig to Horizon Home,Captain are you there?"                                                   Collins"I hear you Big Rig,what's the problem?"                                       Chambers"How well do you know Sonya?"                                                 Collins"Other than the fact that she's our company issued synthetic,I don't know anything about her.Why do ask?"                     Chambers"Well Captain,she's gone off the reservation."                 Collins"What do mean?"                     Chambers"I mean she has broken of all contact Captain,and that's not all.I think the company may have sent her with us for a reason."                                                 Collins"Explain please."                     Chambers"Well Captain before i lost her,she said something about the company wanting the eggs."     Collins"The only egg we found is the one we brought back."                 Chambers"I don't know about that captain.She said there's more down there.She also implied the company knows about them."         Collins"I couldn't see how.I've been with the company for 15 years and have never heard of or have seen anything like this."           Chambers"Great to know the company may be playing straight with us.What's Willits condition?"   Collins"Unchanged.For know we're keeping him on ice.Reynolds is still in quarintine.With her locked down,and Sonya going off the reservation as you put it,I'm afraid there's no choice but to keep him that way."                                              Chambers"Any clue what this thing is doing to him?"                       Collins"No.But what ever it's doing it can't be good.Keep me posted on Sonya.Horizon base out."           Chambers"Big Rig out."                     Chambers slumps back into her chair,clearly stressed.                       Chambers"Any word from Sonya yet Mitchell?"                                       Mitchell"Not a damn one."                 Chambers"Alright.Sh!t.Try raising her again."                                           Sonya"There's no need."                   Chambers turns around,quite surprised to see the synthetic.         Chambers"Jesus Christ Sonya.Where the f@&k did you go?"                                                        Sonya"That's an illogical question.You know where i was."    Chambers"You know what i mean.Did you find your "specimen"?"                                        Sonya"The answer would be no."    Chambers"Really?I don't suppose you would mind telling me what's going on?"                                            Sonya"The answer would be no."   Chambers"Yeah you said that.Why not?"                                                      Sonya"I thought i made it clear my orders don't come from you."           Chambers"And i thought robots were supposed to follow orders regardless of who's giving them."    Sonya almost looks as if she takes offense to the word robot.       Chambers"Now you listen to me very carefully bitch.I don't know what you're up too,but i'm on to you."                                                      Sonya"I hate to disappoint you but there's nothing for me to hide.Being a "robot" I'm incapable of lying."                                                Chambers"And incapable of following orders as well."                  The two women sit there silently for a moment,as if they're sizing each other up.Sonya finally breaks the silence."If you don't mind miss Chambers,I do believe i might be required elsewhere.Perhaps we should return to base." With that Sonya takes her leave.Nora Chambers hails Mitchell."Hey Mitchell,how the hell did Sonya get back onboard?"                                   Mitchell"I didn't even know she was back onboard."                            Chambers"Does the check in show anything?"                                  Mitchell"No nothing.There must be a glitch.I'll have checked back at base."                                                Chambers"So then she could have brought something on board with out our knowing."                                Mitchell"Yeah it's possible.What are you getting at?"                             Chambers"I let you if i'm wrong ."       Mitchell"I still don't get it."              Chambers"Forget it Mitchell.Just keep your eyes on Sonya.I don't trust her."                                                                                                                End Part 3

@ xenowarrior1

Great story! looking to hear more:)

@ ninxeno426

Can't wait for more :)

Continued....

Proxima prime colony 2177....

Weyland yutani Research and colonisation facility...

" sir , the subject, its detached itself". 

"Call the group members together right away private" 

We look upon a general as he relays this news till his superiors on screen..

" it has begun". 

"Keep us informed " replies a group  of executives...Japanese and British descent. Camera fades out..

We are suddenly in a dark room, the woman we saw in the restaurant earlier rummaging through paper work in filing cabinet using a torch ...she obviously is not supposed to be here..

"Got it" she whispers to herself as she holds an envelope in her hand..

She pulls out a communicator out of her satchel..

Carter report ....information obtained, specimen on board...specimen was found in cave system 40klix from here...will move out to investigate at first light..

Scene end...

Scene begin..

We  arrive back at the research lab...the corporate men and woman along with scientists looking on as their subject has awoken...still strapped to the table..

"Help me" " what have you done to me" his cries for help met with silence..

Suddenly the general replays over the intercom..

"You are a wanted criminal for hienous crimes are you not?"

" we have given your life a purpose, you will give us something that will change everything" " the potential it has, limitless".

" wh what, I don't understand," he replys.

Suddenly he screams out in pain as something burst through his chest..blood spraying everywhere.

Cut scene..

such great stories

Thank you Assimilated-xenomorph.Im trying to encourage as many people as i can to partake in this thread.If you have one you'd like to share we would love to hear it.

Wow guys that is some really good stuff, keep up the good work!

I love the level of writing here and how this thread has grown. I offer something a bit off the wall. I call it "Birth". Hopefully you can appreciate it and maybe flesh it out more if desired:

Conscience…………….warm….comfortable………hungry but not overly so………”Kane, the food isn’t that bad. Baby!”…….what is that?.......I don’t feel it but sense it somehow and don’t know what it means…..As I stretch, my environment seems more unstable……It is time to go. ……Chaos is all around me…….I panic again to escape………bars guard me against freedom……..In the chaos I break out and am exposed to a world of………..cold……silence……..strange creatures- one who lashes at me……..why? I do not know……I need safety and I run……..and I will watch, wait and learn….